Writing

Writing: This is my story, Swinging on the Anntanner. I enjoyed writing this story. Other years I have found it hard to write a story becase I didn't know how to write a good plan. This year I have had help and now I can write a good story.

Here is a link to my Formal Letter to the Cadbury Factory: This is my formal letter to the Cadbury factory. We hah to write a formal letter. I wrote mine to the Cadbury factory. You could write a complanit or a thank you or if you had a new flavor you wanted them to invent you could write that. I wrote a thank you letter.

Here is a link to my Portal Story:

We had to write a Portal Story for a test. I wrote mine about going to a secret desination and no one knowing about it. I enjoyed writng this story because I found it quite easy.

What I do well: The thing do well is writing a story with a detailed plan. Things I need to work on: I think I need to work on using better words (more detailed words.)